From Lisa:<br>

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<p>Waiting for Reply from Patric, but if you can POSSIBLY fit in the "Choose what's right" on the first line, then the book title, then the authors...that would be fantastic.&#160; It looks great, but I think she wants the extra line on there if it is do-able.

LISA
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<br>From Patric:<br>

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Hey Eric...<br><br>

<p>Somewhere along the line you will get a message from Lisa with the 
final text for the banner.&#160; It will be a single panel as she 
mentioned in one of your messages..&#160; 

<p>Something like :

Choose what's right.<br>
Becoming your own critique partner.<br>
by Jane Toombs and Janet something or other.<br><br>

<p>Thats from memory so keep an eye out for her reply.

<p>Also, I kinda figured you'd go for the pencil.&#160; Its the most visually 
interesting part.&#160; Suggestion:&#160; Crop the pencil point larget so the 
black word, and the red word above it are more legible.&#160; In other 
words, zoom in on that section so just enough of the yellow shows to 
make it obviously a pencil, and center in on the point and those two 
words.&#160; That will give you more visual impact, and will also 
communicate clearly to anyone whose ever dealt with an editor. That 
red strikeout is a dead giveaway.&#160; :)

<p>And since its a single panel, there is no reason you couldn't extend 
the background of the image to also be the background of the text.

<p>Something to explore, anyway.

<p>Feel free to toss me another look if you want, but you've already got 
a great start on it.&#160; Nice job.

<p>Patric

<p>(Ah..&#160; Heres the message from lisa with the confirmation on the 
"choose whats right" line.&#160; Great.)
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<br>My reply:<br>

<p>Take 3.

- Eric.<br><br>

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