"The Essence of Story," Assignment Four

Sunny Johnson
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    I chose to analyze "Pawn of Prophecy" by David Eddings, it is Book One of a five-volume series called The Belgariad.  Genre:  Fantasy.

  1. Protagonist: Garion, a young boy who is struggling to define his identy and origins.  This book mainly sets the stage for the rest of the series, providing the childhood events which bring Garion to accept his destiny -- to face his inherited enemy, Asharak, an evil sorcerer.

  2. The prologue sets up the larger conflict line, showing the ancient battle fought by the immortal sorcerer Belgarath versus the evil god Torak over the powerful Orb of Aldur, ending with Torak lying "asleep" beneath his mountain temple, and the Orb guarded by the Rivan Kings.  The book begins thousands of years later, with the hint that soon Belgarath and his immortal daughter Polgara will have to renew their ancient conflict with the worshippers of Torak.

  3. At first blush, this would lead one to see Belgarath vs. Torak as the conflict line, with the goal being good prevailing over evil or possibly the rewards of unity (Belgarath unites the various peoples to fight Torak) vs. the awful consequences of greed (Torak ends up blinded and disfigured and put into a coma of sorts.)  Yet even though those lines were sketched out in the prologue, the first chapter starts somewhere completely different, with Garion as a small child on Faldor's farm, being guarded over by "Aunt Pol."  (obviously the sorceress Polgara) and Durnik, the prosaic blacksmith.  Pol will not tell Garion anything about his parents.

  4. On page one, after showing Garion playing securely on the farm, the real antagonist of this book is foreshadowed --  Garion sees a figure in a dark cloak watching him play, and this causes Garion to feel a cold chill of aprehension, but he finds he is unable to tell anyone about seeing him.  This gives us a double goal for young Garion:  to find out who the recurring dark figure is, and to find out who Garion himself really is.   These goals are the impetus driving the plot as Garion must choose whether to remain a child, ignorant of larger forces in the world, or whether to rise to the greater and often frightening challenges of his kingly heritage.

  5. By mid-book, Garion has reached rock-bottom because his eavesdropping and putting together of clues have convinced him that he is not who he always thought he was.  It is especially painful for him to think that his aunt Pol is not really his aunt.  Every chapter is full of scenes, mostly dialog, which unfold the drama of Garion's inner conflict.  He becomes more and more determined to show himself a man so that people, especially aunt Pol, will stop treating him as a child.

  6. This decision of his to behave as a man and find out the answers to his questions causes Garion to get into scrapes and situations he is unready for from the first chapter to the last, as his idea of solving his dilemmas is usually to rush headlong into danger without telling anyone where he is.  In the second half of the book, which takes place at the Cherek Palace where all the Alorian Kings are meeting, Garion decides to spy on the spy.  In other words, he follows the suspicious character he has seen, thus alerting the royalty of a terrible plot in the nick of time.  Along the way he also learns of his own identity and the identity of his enemy, plus he comes face-to-face with his terrifying enemy and survives, ready to face the next challenge.  This relsolves, at least partially, both Garion's inner and exterior conflicts.

    Comments? Sunny Johnson


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